Journey to Another Life: Page 2 [TF/TG Commission]

Hey Baku sorry I took a few days to give you some advice and feedback on your commission!

First I want to say how much I love how you draw humans in general, I love the anime style as I drew it A LOT growing up so I have a huge guilty pleasure for anything anime related and this is no exception! I also love how you've drawn Gold as a female, you've made her look super cute and she's not even fully female yet which is a huge plus lol! Your expressions, specially in the last few panels, really bring your art to life and it's something I always love in drawings so it's great to see you have a great understanding on how to portray certain emotions. Backgrounds and perspectives are all great too (I can't really comment much on those as I am crap at backgrounds haha)

My only real comment is maybe make the shading a little more prominent, I noticed in this comic it's a little watered down but shading, when used right can really set a scene and an atmosphere. Page 1 would look that much better if the shading was darker as I'm getting a very strong impression that the pool is emitting a strong light which would mean the shadows would be that much stronger and darker.

Aside from that, you're doing a great job on this and I look forward to seeing more of your commissions and work!